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hoanvu0909
18-09-2009, 09:52 AM
My famyly have four member . they are my father , my mother, i and my young sister. We like in Dai Loc town( quang nam province) . my name's Vu. I'm 19 years old . I'm student. my major is technical electronic elecommunication.I'm studying in HCM technical education of university.
My dream is go to study in England and eating alot of money.I want have a house in Phu My Hung Town. My father is a dentist. he is concerned about our study . He is a jovial man .But i fear him very mụch My morther is a shop assistant in my house. she is very resourcefull women . My young sister is very nice and good student in your school .She is likes listening to classical music. My family is very hapy and i love it
thỏ_trắng_bé_nhỏ
18-09-2009, 03:23 PM
My famyly have four members . they are my father , my mother, i and my younger sister. We like(live) in Dai Loc town( quang nam province) . my name's Vu. I'm 19 years old . I'm a student. my major is technical electronic elecommunication.I'm studying in HCM technical education of university.
My dream is go(going) to study in England and eating(earning) alot of money.I want have a house in Phu My Hung Town. My father is a dentist. he is concerned about our study . He is a jovial man .But i fear him very mụch My morther is a shop assistant in my house. she is very resourcefull women . My younger sister is very nice and a good student in your school .She is likes listening to classical music. My family is very hapy and i love it
Mình biết sơ sơ nhưng cũng cố gắng giúp bạn.Nhờ các cao thủ hơn hoàn thiện tiếp.
..::Scorpior::..
18-09-2009, 06:35 PM
My family has four members . they are my father , my mother, i--> me and my younger sister. We live in Dai Loc town( quang nam province) . my name's Vu. I'm 19 years old . I'm a student. my major is technical electronic elecommunication.I'm studying in-at HCM technical education of university.
My dream is to go to study in England and eating->earn alot of money.I want to have a house in Phu My Hung Town. My father is a dentist. he is concerned about our study . He is a jovial man .But i fear him very mụch My morther is a shop assistant in my house ???. she is very resourcefull ?? woman . My younger sister is very nice and she's a good student in her school .She is likes listening to classical music. My family is very hapy and i love it
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c0pblack
06-10-2009, 12:00 PM
I'm 22 years old. I was born in Hanoi capital. I've just finished studying at Vietnam Commercial University on Ho Tung Mau street. Now, I'm learning E in AE1 class at ACET Hanoi. I've studied E there for 2 months and I'm going to study there for a long time. I'm a bit quiet and shy guy :wacko:. My purpose is studying at RMIT Hanoi. I want to get a cetificate of Master Bussiness Administration.
My slogan: " To live is to fight "
Very happy to meet you!
Waiting for your help!
hihihahabinh
09-10-2009, 11:02 AM
I'm 22 years old. I was born in Hanoi capital. I've just finished studying at Vietnam Commercial University on Ho Tung Mau street. Now, I'm learning E in AE1 class at ACET Hanoi. I've studied E there for 2 months and I'm going to study there for a long time. I'm a bit quiet and shy guy :wacko:. My purpose is to studying at RMIT Hanoi. I want to get a cetificate of Master Bussiness Administration.
My slogan: " To live is to fight "
Very happy to meet you!
Waiting for your help!
Please check the red text, I hope it help you :57:
huy87
15-10-2009, 11:30 PM
My name is Huy. I’m a student. I ‘m twenty-three years old. We live in Long An province. Now, I ‘m boarding in Thu Duc district. My family has five members. They are my grandmother, my father, my mother, my young brother and me. My parents are famer and my young brother study in highschool.
I hope I will have find a job in HCM city. I know unless I try my best to major and soft skills, I won’t find a job. Today, I always worry about everything such as: money, myfamily,……. I wish I will have earn much money in the future.
violetstar
16-10-2009, 08:53 AM
My name is Huy. I’m a student. I ‘m twenty-three years old. We(My family) live(lives) in Long An province. Now, I ‘m boarding in Thu Duc district. My family has five members. They are my grandmother, my father, my mother, my young(younger) brother and me. My parents are famer(farmer) and my young(younger) brother study(studies) in highschool.
I hope I will find a job in HCM city. I know unless I try my best to major and(in) soft skills, I won’t find a job. Today (in present), I always worry about everything such as: money, my family,……. I wish I will earn much money in the future.
milkvip1991
07-11-2009, 10:01 PM
Hello everybody , today I would like to tell you about my family , there are 5 people in my family : my grandfather , my father , my mother , my brother and me. My grandfather is a pensioner , although he was pensioned but he is a photographer , he can take pic everywhere , what he think is beautiful , he will take pic , he is 80 years old , his hobbies is phay chess with his friends , go swimming and take pic everywhere , my father is a engineer , he is 53 years old , his hobbies is go out with my mother , plays sport and eats special foods , my mother is a businesswoman , she’s 47 years old , her hobbies is go shopping and go to coffee shop with her friends , my brother is a student , he is studying in infoworld school , he’s 21 years old , he just has one hobbies is plays computer games, he can sit in front of the computer about 10 hours in a day , and me .I’m student , I’m 18 years old , I’m studying in hochiminh university of industry , my hobbies is play tennis and go swimming with my grandfather.
mybook
08-11-2009, 09:49 AM
Hello everybody , today I would like to tell you about my family , there are 5 people in my family : my grandfather , my father , my mother , my brother and me. My grandfather is a pensioner , although he was pensioned but he is a photographer , he can take pic everywhere , what he think is beautiful , he will take pic , he is 80 years old , his hobbies is phay chess with his friends , go swimming and take pic everywhere , my father is a engineer , he is 53 years old , his hobbies is(are) go out with my mother , plays sport and eats special foods , my mother is a business woman , she’s 47 years old , her hobbies is(are) go shopping and go to coffee shop with her friends , my brother is a student , he is studying in infoworld school , he’s 21 years old , he just has one hobbies is plays computer games, he can sit in front of the computer about 10 hours in a day , and me .I’m student , I’m 18 years old , I’m studying in hochiminh university of industry , my hobbies is(are ) play tennis and go swimming with my grandfather.
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live to love
08-11-2009, 10:08 AM
Hello everybody , today I would like to tell you about my family , there are 5 people in my family : my grandfather , my father , my mother , my brother and me. My grandfather is a pensioner , although he was pensioned but he is a photographer , he can take pic everywhere , what he think is beautiful( đây là cấu trúc j) , he will take pic , he is 80 years old , his hobbies is phay> play ( sao to be lại đứng cạnh động từ như vây?)chess with his friends , go swimming and take pic everywhere , my father is a engineer , he is 53 years old , his hobbies is go???? out with my mother , plays sport and eats special foods , my mother is a businesswoman , she’s 47 years old , her hobbies is go shopping and go to coffee shop with her friends , my brother is a student , he is studying in infoworld school , he’s 21 years old , he just has one hobbies is plays computer games, he can sit in front of the computer about 10 hours in a day , and me .I’m student , I’m 18 years old , I’m studying in hochiminh university of industry , my hobbies is play tennis and go swimming with my grandfather.
tui biết sai mà ko sữa dc mọi người xem xét giúp nha:85:
lucky_star_1213
08-11-2009, 01:58 PM
hello Everybody , Today I Would Like To Tell You About My Family , There Are 5 People In My Family : My Grandfather , My Father , My Mother , My Brother And Me. My Grandfather Is A Pensioner , Although He Was Pensioned But He Is A Photographer , He Can Take Pic Everywhere , What He Thinks Is Beautiful , He Will Take Pic , He Is 80 Years Old , His Hobbies is are Playing Chess With His Friends , Going Swimming And Taking Pic Everywhere , My Father Is An Engineer , He Is 53 Years Old , His Hobbies is are Going Out With My Mother , Playing Sports And Eating Special Foods (food Là Danh Từ Ko đếm được, Ko Có Dạng Số Nhiều), My Mother Is A Businesswoman , She’s 47 Years Old , Her Hobbies is are Going Shopping And Going To Coffee Shop With Her Friends , My Brother Is A Student , He Is Studying in at Infoworld School , He’s 21 Years Old , He Just Has One Hobby Is Playing Computer Games, He Can Sit In Front Of The Computer About 10 Hours In A Day , And Me .i’m Student , I’m 18 Years Old , I’m Studying in at Hochiminh University Of Industry , My Hobbies is are Playing Tennis And Going Swimming With My Grandfather.
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live to love
08-11-2009, 08:26 PM
có cấu trúc he thinks is beautiful:58_002::58_002::58_002:
đây là cấu trúc j??
lucky_star_1213
08-11-2009, 10:34 PM
đây là cấu trúc j??
bản phải xem cả câu chứ
What He Thinks Is Beautiful
What he thinks là chủ ngữ
điều mà ông ấy nghĩ
matnaden
09-11-2009, 12:32 PM
Today, I will tell you about my family.
There are five members in my family such as my parents, younger sister and younger brother. My dad is an authoritarian person. He never permit me doing everything if he don’t concur or like. On the other hand, he always give advice me to ensure I deal with suitable way.
Conversely, my mom is very pleasant. Although I had done wrong, she never censure me. Therefore, my father told that “ if our family don’t have me, make sure that it is not tidy”. This is suitable, isn’t it?
My family live in a small house, just enough for 4 people to live but I am always satisfy. One reason is that if you live in a large house, each of members will have a private room. They are difficult to have the communication of all members so they have a private space in their home. I love my family very much, if I have a choice, I don’t want to live far away my family. This end.
quocbao153
09-11-2009, 03:03 PM
Today, I will tell you about my family.
There are five members in my family such as including my parents, one younger sister and one younger brother and I . My dad is an authoritarian person. He never permit permits me doing to do everything if he don’tdoes not concur or like. On the other hand, he always givegives advice me me some advice to ensure I deal with difficulties suitable waysuitably.
Conversely, my mom is very pleasant. Although I had donedo something wrong, she never censurecensures me. Therefore, my father toldtell me that if our family don’t have me, he makes make sure that it is not tidy”. Thisit is suitable, isn’t it?
My family livelives in a small house, just enough for 4 people to live but I am always satisfy. OneOnly reason is that if youwe live in a large house, each of members each member will have a private room. They are difficult to have the communication of all members so theyIt is difficult for us to communicate together because we have private spaces in their our home. I love my family very muc. If I have a choice, I don’t want to live far away from my family. This endThat is all.
Comments:
Có ý nhưng diễn đạt lủng củng
Ngữ pháp sai nhiều quá, chú ý đang dùng thì hiện tại mà, nên phải xem sự hòa hợp giữa chủ từ và động từ nhá :D
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Hope you be successful in your studies
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hunter_pro1015
09-11-2009, 06:48 PM
Let’s me introduce myself! My name is Long Giang. I’m 15 years old. I’m studying in Le Loi school. It located in Tay Thanh street. I study not well but also quite. There are 5 members in my familly including my father, my mother, 2 sisters and I. I live in normal familly, not too rich or not too poor. My father has been working on the factory and my mother has been working on school. She is secretery, she works as hard as my father. My sisters just graduated in 2009. they are looking for a jobs. On the other hand, my elder sister has not found a good jobs. Besides, I love my mother too much. She works so hard because she want me to have more a good live than her. I wish I would be a technology engineer in order to aid my familly have a good life. That’s all bye
quocbao153
10-11-2009, 08:46 AM
Let’s me introduce myself! My name is Long Giang. I’m 15 years old. I’m studying in Le Loi school. It is located in Tay Thanh street. I study not well but also quiteI don't study well but fairly. There are 5 members in my familly including my father, my mother, 2 sisters and I. I live in a normal familly, which is not too rich or not too poor. My father has been working onin thea factory and my mother has been working on schoolin a school. She is a secretery. She works as hard as my father. My sisters have just graduated in 2009. They are looking for a jobs. On the other hand, Still, my elder sister couldn't find has not found a good jobs. Besides, I love my mother too much. She works so hard because she wants me to have more a good livea better live than her. I wish I would be a technologytechnological engineer in order to aidhelp my familly have a good lifelive. That’s all bye
Comments:
Bài viết chuẩn, có ý, diễn đạt tốt
Tuy nhiên vẫn mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản như: a good jobs->a good job, có mạo từ a thì danh từ làm gì mà ở số nhiều, thêm s chi vậy em :D
Cấu trúc câu zui zui, người nước ngoài đọc vào hiểu chít lìn :D
=>I study not well but also quite;more a good live
Nói chung cố gắng nha em, có tinh thần tự học là wa good ùi, chỉ cần biết cách học nữa là :DK
Download tài lịu bên dưới về để luyện thêm grammar nha :D
nancynouble
22-11-2009, 08:21 PM
Today, I introduce my family to you. There are four members in my house. They are my parents, my sister and me.
Firstly, I talk about my parents. My Vietnamese mother was born after 1975 at Cambodia,for the war happens in Vietnam. My dad joined the army, and went fighting to Cambodia. They accidentally met when my father got wounded in right hand. She took care of him, then they fell in love each other. As soon as the war was put an end, they turned back to Vietnam. With the permission of my grandparents, the got married. At that point, they suffered such miserable lives that they earned too few money to enjoy their honeymoon. But it did not encumber their happy lives. My momther not only graduated medical university but also spoke French and English fluently. My father got a diploma in economy. Though they werenot born with a silver spoon in their mouths, they cought be solvent , even bought a new house for my grandparents after only 4 years.
In the second way, the story is about my sister and me. My sister was a student in medical university. She worked in 115 hospital one year ago. Now, she is studying in France. She has gone abroad since summer. I am a second year student of economic university. I am learning English by heart every day.
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